Moon Beam you lighten up the road as the night pedals unfold like an incandescent rose all the crease seem to show the rough edges, they glow so that I may stay on the road.. Moon Beam you cradle the night and the road that I drive and we all may survive there is need for you to hide if the clouds come out to night.. Moon Beam where did you go the clouds come and hang low although you don't know I still see your glow through the haze it flows like the blush of a rose your light glisten on the road you still lighten load
Ashley,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this piece of writing! I like how you rhymed a lot because it gave the piece a good tempo. I also liked the word choice you used! You made it very descriptive so I could imagine everything that was happening. This piece was very interesting and fun to read! Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to reading more of your blogs!
-Courtney A